Lord Of The Flies
Chapter #4: Painted Faces and Long Hair
Perspective: Ralph
Hard
It is rarely hard to be the chief of the island. I never knew how it can affect my life. I thought I was going to die out here. But every one gave me confidence that I can do this. I think that if I never became chief of this island, I just might have died. I mean Jack would be good at chief too, but we have different ways of puting things together. I think that I can handle being chief but it is very hard and I won't be able to do it right away. I think that I can help every body in this island in different ways. I think that I can help other people because I am a good guy and it can help alot of other people.
I think that this island will be hard to live in because all of us are kids. I also think that it will be hard because we will have to try to cook food and I don't think that any of us know how to cook. Also because it is very hard for us to get food and more importantly, some good water. I think that food and drinks will also be kind of easy to find because there is a lot of it around here. It is very cool that there is a lot of food and drinks because it is very good to eat and drink.
1 comments:
I like how you are very descriptive and it's almost like you are Ralph. But you should use atleast 5 of the senses and the 5 vocabulary words but otherwise your great. I also think that you have a vivid imagination because, you like write alot and you expand what your writing which is very interesting.
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